Moriah Leila

I like the idea of a love letter straight from heaven. I certainly never thought of having the dead communicate with the living in such a touching way. When I ...

I use like, right, and seriously a lot. And whenever I am trying to write historic fiction, I inevitably use modern slang that ruins the credibility of my story. But ...

I am not entirely sure this is the right place to ask this question but hopefully someone can help me out. Currently I am writing a novel about a girl ...

This is absolutely beautiful. I cannot imagine how much time this must have taken you. I really like how you made it look like a gnarled tree monster. The door ...

I wonder about things Why call it manganese? Does it make any sense? Or am I going sane? Does cheese and butter Make milk outdated? Like bubbling mold In an ...

Hey there, NewHero recommended that I review your story, but it looks like everyone has already covered what I wanted to say. I enjoyed your story because at first I ...

I wrote this piece almost six years ago and I think it shows. I'd like you to tear it apart so that I can refine it. Taryn turned her face ...

*Kneels down and thanks God this was a prank* Seriously, you almost made me cry.

All reviews have been completed. Sorry it has taken me so long. This next week I will probably not be able to do any reviews as I will be getting ...

Hey there. I think this is a good prologue. It is a very interesting plot. However, you need to work on several things. First of all, you can be very ...

So this one was not one of my favorites, it was quite confusing at times, and a lot of times I had to re-read paragraphs to try to understand exactly ...

Okay, so I have to give you major props for this one. I knew it was another mindless rant, but this time there was so much humor, that I really ...

Can I be brutally honest? While the humor is there, I felt like this was a long drawn-out rant over something incredibly petty. Seriously? You just used 774 words to ...

Yeah, I have to agree that this piece is rather difficult to critique. Basically everything on the side of constructive criticism that I was going to say, Critiq already said ...

Okay, not to sound redundant but Hippie is absolutely correct. Your story is very rushed and there seems to be a lot more telling than showing. We as your readers ...